Thursday, September 1, 2022

The Village Awakes

The village slowly beings to shake off its slumber and come to life.

The mothers are the first to stir, leaving the warmth of straw-mattressed beds to hitch up night clothes and squat over porcelain nightjars, emptying their bladders.

Shivering in the dawn chill they lace coarse woollen dresses over petticoats and descend to the kitchen to coax the fire into life, pushing a heavy blackened kettle across it. Next come their husbands, tumble-haired and granite-faced, accepting the bowl of steaming gruel held out to them and eating in flinty silence.

They’re joined at intervals by children, ranging in size and wakefulness, alert and chatty to sleepy and yawning, called to the hearthside by the aroma of simmering pottage and the voice of their mothers, prompting them downstairs to prepare for the day ahead. Young girls, miniatures of their mothers, tie on aprons and smooth down caps, take over the slicing of bread doorsteps or the shovelling of food into infant mouths.

Brothers pull heavy nailed boots over thick socks, take oilcloth-wrapped sandwiches from their sisters’ hands and clatter from the houses, their young voices shattering the frosty morning air. They join the throng heading for the pithead, and so the morning begins.

The streets return again to semi-quiet, to become the domain of the women and infants until the work of the day is done.

Alison Mott


This snatch of writing was first created at a session of the Informals Writing group in March 2016. It was prompted by a memory my mother-in-law had shared of watching her grandfather prepare for a day's work at the pit in West Hallam, Derbyshire, in the 1950s (but I gave it a historical twist).

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